In the past decade people wrote to impress others, rather than to communicate with them. Many business writers used formal language and multi-syllable words that no one ever said out loud (like "notwithstanding" and "heretofore"). Lawyers still speak and write in this manner, called ?legalese,? which is a complicated and unnecessary writing style.
Today's business writing style is less formal and far better. You must embrace both clarity and brevity to write properly in our fast-paced, information-bloated world.
Here are five essential tips to write better business documents:
1. WRITE BELOW THE 8th-GRADE LEVEL. Some writers worry that this may insult their readers? intelligence. In reality, no one complains that something is too easy to understand. Studies show that writing below the 8th-grade level achieves the best results. Your readers are not dumb; they just don't have time to process and recall complicated messages.
Here's how to check the readability of your writing when using MS Word: Under "Tools" click "Options" and then "Spelling & Grammar." Select the "Check grammar with spelling" box and the "Show readability statistics" box then click "OK." The next time you complete a spell check, it will display information about the reading level. If the "Flesch-Kincaid grade level" is above 8, edit your document to make it easier to understand. You can also go to www.ReadabilityFormulas.com and use a free readability formulas tester to determine the reading-level of your materials.
2. GET TO THE POINT IMMEDIATELY. As a general rule, state the reason for your correspondence in the first sentence.
Good: "We've filled this position and are not accepting applications."
Bad: "Unfortunately, the position for which you applied has already been filled and we are therefore no longer accepting applications."
3. GET ACTIVE (use active voice, not passive). Writing in passive voice makes you write wordy sentences; instead, write in active voice for clarity and impact.
Active Voice: "We like your ideas and will implement them by the end of the year."
Passive Voice: "The ideas you proposed have been reviewed and found to be acceptable and appropriate. An implementation schedule has been developed with the goal of being completed by the end of the year."
4. USE FEWER WORDS. People are busy; be brief!
Good: "We will not tolerate sexual harassment. Please read the attached policy. Call Mr. Smith if you have questions."
Bad: "This is to inform all employees that sexual harassment of any kind will not be tolerated under any circumstances by this organization. Be advised that, in order to clarify the company position on this subject, the attached policy has been developed and provided for your reference. Your cooperation in this important matter is appreciated. Please do not hesitate to contact Mr. Smith if he can be of further assistance or provide you with additional information about this issue."
5. INCLUDE A CLEAR CALL TO ACTION. If you are writing for a purpose other than to inform, tell your readers exactly what you want them to do.
Good: "Please sign the attached form in Block 12 and return it to me by June 1st."
Bad: "It is our desire to receive an indication of your concurrence as soon as possible."
Bonus tip:
6. DO NOT REPEAT NUMBERS. Spelling out numbers and then repeating them as digits within parentheses is redundant and unnecessary. Use this basic rule: less than 10 or beginning a sentence, spell it out; more than 10, use digits. Do NOT do both!
Good: "We collected 13 samples."
Bad: "Thirteen (13) samples were collected."
Many writers and non-writers use a plain English editor called StyleWriter (www.StyleWriter-USA.com) to write simply, clearly, and correctly.
In summary, you should write business correspondence in a format and style similar to your verbal communications. TRANSLATION: WRITE LIKE YOU TALK.
How To Write Better English
If you know how to do something -- and can do it well, almost without thinking -- it makes sense that you'd want to share this information. What better way to do it than with an instruction manual. Writing an instruction manual may seem complicated and overwhelming, but it is easier than you think. The following tips will instruct you what to do and how to do it.
OUTLINE YOUR TOPIC
Before you can teach someone how to do something successfully, you need to conceptualize which aspects of the project they need to know. If your topic is complicated, such as how to play the piano, list each chapter and outline the points you need to make. If it's simpler, such as the task of changing a tire, briefly jot down all the steps that come to mind. Don't worry about the details or if you list the steps out of order; we will fix these things later.
START WITH THE SUPPLIES
The most logical way to start an instruction manual is to list the supplies the reader will need for the project. Be as exhaustive with this as possible; your students will thank you. If any of the supplies are expensive or difficult to find, list alternatives or stores that carry the item.
MOVE STEP BY STEP
Instead of explaining the task in long paragraphs, break your instruction manual into specific, detailed steps. Give as much direction as possible; if one step requires slightly different tasks, create sub-steps. Think of these as an outline; number or letter the steps accordingly (and logically).
DO THE PROJECT
If your instruction manual details a tangible project, then complete it using only your written guide. Don't improvise and don't go on your prior knowledge. If it's difficult for you to do this (subjectivity is sometimes next to impossible to ignore), ask a friend to use your manual to complete the project. Look carefully at the finished product; did it turn out as you'd envisioned? Did you miss something important? Continue to revise and describe until your written words encompass every step in the most detailed and effective way possible.
KEEP IT SIMPLE
Writing an instruction manual is different from writing literary fiction; creative wordiness isn't important here -- it's clarity you're after. Use short sentences and simple words. Make sure your manual is clear and readable; if the reader can't understand what you're saying, they won't be able to complete your project.
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